How many of you knew that that guy was going to Byzner?
Obviously, reading the pages one right after the other, it isn't like I'm trying to build that mystery. A guy falls from the sky and you find out it's Byzner. I don't let you wonder for to long who this guy is. But with how the entries broke it up it adds perhaps a little more build up.
It's fun thinking about how these entries read each week. I'll be honest, I don't think I'm making a story that reads well two pages at a time spaced out over weeks.
Anyway, these to pages make more references to the first scenes of the story. Go back and check it out.
Till next week.
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